The Quite kid
Ya I know him
he sits there in the corner
listening to weird music
I used to make fun of him
I Don't any more, I swear I don't
The Quite kid
He just sits there drawing
what, I dont know
Just go and look
See for yourself
The Quite kid
At lunch he sit alone
at that table all by himeself
Eating a sandwitch
and reading a book
About vampires
The Quite kid
says he writes poetry
He says it quiet good
With a sense of deep emotion
I just laugh and say
"poetry is for pussies"
The Quite kid
In gym class
So scrawny in his shorts
his skin so pale
white like milk
I say "go outside and get a tan you little freak"
The Quite kid
Sees Me trip and fall
in the hall way
And as I get up
I am staring at 7 inches of gunmetal
in the Quite kids hand.
The Quite kid
for the first time I hear his voice
"all I wanted was alittle credit,
All i wanted was to be accepted,
For who I am,
And not who you want me to be"
i wrote a sequel poem for this too.
If you are the quiet kid, I hope that you find a way to deal with your demons...other than murdering your tomentors. I am by no means a writing or poetry expert but if there is a way to "polish" or punch up the sentance structure, it would really help to completely draw the reader into the "Quiet Kid's" world. Overall, it is still an excellent work.